Don't give up, don't surrender

I just had some inspiration to write something after reading „Never stop surrender“. Here is my interpretation or version of it.

"Don't give up, don't surrender"

You're going somewhere, straight and true
you find some love, clear and blue
then it fails, what to do?

"Don't give up, don't surrender", the candor prescription could then render.

If you're looking back on past despair
If you dream of life to come was there
and charmas wheel comes crushing bye...

"Don't despair, the wheel will turn", is something every Buddhist would churn.

How it hurts, lightning heart thunder
the sorrow pulls you deep down under
to start again, is but a squander

"it's not the goal, but the odyssey" shouts my lovelife in controversy

"Don't give up, don't surrender", the candor prescription should then render.